School (poem)
61School House
School
Sitting at a desk, rows, collums
Listening, learning, hearing what he is saying
Writing as he speaks keeping us with
The pace, like a race
A mile
In the beginning taking down all you can
To stay with him and not get left behind
Behind the pack, the group
You eventually set into the pace, put yourself
On cruise control
Control yoor thoughts, his thoughts
And formulate them onto paper
The blank white paper with lines
Now gray with writing
Art, the geometric shapes of communication
Like words it spreads
The knowledge across the room,
Across the campus
Across the state, nation, world
Amazing isn’t it, the plague of art
Like an anti virus for ignorance this place, this establishment
School
Talking about my biology class at the beginning of school when I liked it, I wrote “Not a place I have to be, a place I chose to be. Not all get the chance to be here, so think in the most positive way. Ironic I ended up thinking entirely different later huh.
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Splendid flow in that poetry jrosemond!: )
School is such a trial for so many people. With that thinking head of yours and your creativity, you should have no problem. Just focus and ask God's help and mountains will move for you. Great poem, good job. Love, Bob.
This brings back memories to me. We have all been there and we all go through it too. Worrying that we may not fit in or make the "grade". We have to settle in, give ourselves a chance, and we have to have friends and mentors too. It's all strange and amazing till we just wake up one day and we are used to it all. We acclimatise to learning. Great hub! Well deserves rating up! : )
FROM WHAT MY EYE'S JUST SEEN YOU HAVE WHAT IT TAKE'S TO WRITE A BOOK YOU SHOULD DO IT BECAUSE AM WRITING TO AND I LOVE IT FREEDOM TO PUT WHAT YOU FEEL ON PAPER IS LIKE A HIGH THAT WE SHOULD ALL GET ON I DON'T KNOW YOU BUT GOD BLESS YOU.










jrosemond Hub Author 2 years ago
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